January 11, 2011 - We have an essay!

As the title may suggest, we now have a full essay, complete with a conclusion, an introduction, and three body, mini-essays. It is extremely long. And in the process of being edited. If Jess would email me back, that would be great! Anyhow, Isabel did a major edit today, while Dorothy worked on her bibliography. Reading over Isabel's edits tonight, Dorothy has decided Isabel's format of writing her section (one paragraph about the actual information, then one paragraph about how it connects to Yertle) shall be the format from now on. She will re-write her bit at some point tonight, and Isabel and Dorothy will deconstruct Jesse's part and re-write it for him. Sorry, Jess. Oh, and we just realized we have to do in-text citations. That will take another half hour to figure out... oh well, this is why you read the assignment sheet before you write the essay.